a time my world changed D1

The Phone Call

My sister and I were told

that we were going to my

dad’s.

So we said

good bye

to everyone

then told are mom

that we would see her

Tomorrow.

We got to are dad’s

but he seemed more…

distant

then other times.

As we were just about to

be tucked in for bed

The phone rang

1

2

3

4

it stopped

A

moment

of

silence...

this was the

first time

I saw my dad
cry.

My mom had

passed away.

That was the start of the

Revolving door called

My life.

I am having trouble making it flow any advice?

what do you think of it?